Engl 3130 Advanced Composition, Fall 2021


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Model Student Essays 
last update: August 21, 2021 

 

These are "A" essays, written by ETSU students for this Advanced Composition class during the past few years, and published here with the authors' written permissions. The essays are arranged by assignment type. -- Dr. O'Donnell, instructor -- odonnell@etsu.edu

 

I. Narrative based on experience 
- An Adventure I Will Never Forget: Grandfather Mountain. By Katie Chafin. Fall 2016. 

Beowulf and the 1,000-Year-Old Body: My Walk Through Sutton Hoo in Suffolk, England. By Kristin Lyons. Fall 2019.

Dropping One Hundred and Twenty Feet in Four Seconds: My Daughter and I Experience the Summit Plummet at Blizzard Beach, the Third-Tallest Free-fall Water Slide in the World. By Cheston Axton. Fall 2020.

- Histoplasmosis Syndrome: My Experience with an Ocular Injection. By Kelsey Grubb. Spring 2016.

Learning to Drive: A Trip in Humor, Love, and Fear. By Sarah A. Keesee. Spring 2017.

My First Night on the High School Marching Field: The sock tans may fade but the memories will last forever. By Morgan Baskett. Fall 2016. 

My Journey Through Hell; A Memoir of my First Marriage. By D. S. Black. Fall 2020. 

The Redneck Waterslide: How I (Almost) Broke My Back at Church Camp. By Sarah McNabb. Fall 2020.

Vacationing in Redneck Paradise: Lakewood Camping Resort in South Myrtle Beach, South Carolina--“Yee-Haw”. By Grace Roberts. Fall 2019.

Viking Mountain: Greeneville, Tennessee--The Location For Grace, Beauty, And Wonder. By Katelin Mckeehan. Fall 2020.

Waking Nightmares: Visits from My Sleep Paralysis Demons. By Harrison Pollitte. Fall 2020.

 

II. Tech writing 
Bare to Brilliant in Thirty Minutes: a Makeup Tutorial for the Cosmetically Challenged. By Kylie Hensley. Fall 2015.

Breaking My Father’s Heart: Understanding Atrial Fibrillation Catheter Ablation. By William R. Wight. Fall 2019.

Cooking Like Mamaw: A Guide to Cooking Biscuits and Gravy; Boston Roast with Brown Gravy; and Blackberry Cobbler. By Kayla Welden. Fall 2017.

A Five-Day Guide to Climbing in the High Country of North Carolina. By Andrew Miller. Spring 2017.

A Guide to Caring for Your Pet Rats. By Anne-Marie Wilson. Fall 2019.

Stop Fighting Your Curls: A Guide to Embracing Your Natural Hair Texture. By Tracy Ezel. Fall 2020. 

If I Can Make Them, Anyone Can: Meatloaf and Boneless Wing Recipes to Benefit the Culinarily Challenged. By Abigail Seay. Fall 2019.

 

III. Review/ criticism 
Billie Eilish Gives us a Glimpse of the Future of Pop Music: A Review of When We All Fall Asleep, Where Do We Go?  By Jordan Ayers. Fall 2020. 

Blues Run the Game: A Look at the Tragic Life of Jackson C. Frank, the disregarded folk talent whose gorgeous music was undermined by childhood trauma, poverty, and schizophrenia. By Hunter Eaton. Fall 2019.

Dawes’ Most Dawes Record Yet: A Review of All Your Favorite Bands. By Kayla Hensley. Spring 2016.

Defying the Stereotypes: Taking a Chance on a Morrissey Concert (July 2015 – At the Ryman Auditorium). By Emma Owens. Spring 2017.

A Dreamlike State of Life: The Love and Loss Depicted in Good at Falling, the Debut Album by The Japanese House. By Alana Shuler. Fall 2020.

Eastwood's Sully: Investigations of a Pilot's Forced River Landing. By Terri Cornett. Spring 2017.

I’m Happy & It’s Homey: A Review of Open Doors Coffeehouse. By Olivia Preshong. Fall 2020.

I’ve Waited a Long Time for This: A Review of a Marilyn Manson Concert (October 23, 2018 at the Knoxville Civic Auditorium). By Cheri Barnes. Fall 2018.

More Than a Kid’s Show: A Review of Nickelodeon’s Hit Cartoon: Avatar: The Last Airbender. By Emily Bowens. Fall 2020.

The Power of Interactive Narrative: A Review of What Remains of Edith Finch. By Cameron Davis. Fall 2019.

The Pursuit of Happiness: Lana Del Rey’s Norman Fucking Rockwell! By Carson Morgan. Fall 2019.

Running Out of Time: A Review of Supermassive's New Survival Horror Game, "Until Dawn". By Sam Campbell. Fall 2015.


IV. Writing from sources

Attention Deficit and Hyperactivity Disorder: One Parent’s Battle to Understanding the Disorder. By Kim Rigsby. Fall 2015.

Black Greek-Lettered Organizations: How Schools Like ETSU Benefit from Their Presences. By Jade Delahoussaye. Fall 2017.

“For Those About To Rock": The History of AC/DC From 1976 - Present. By Olivia Bower. Fall 2016.

Give us a Gender Neutral Pronoun, Yo!: The Need for and Creation of a Gender Neutral, Singular, Third Person, Personal Pronoun. By Elizabeth Elrod. Fall 2013.

Living with Stigma: Dealing with the Diagnosis of Borderline Personality Disorder. By Amanda Young. Spring 2016.

Social Media and the Pro-Anorexia Movement: How the Internet and Social Media are the only things feeding Pro-Ana believers. By Chelsea Temple. Spring 2018.

Willis O’Brien: Unsung Pioneer of Animation and Special Effects. By Christian A. Bice. Fall 2019.

The Woman Behind the Curtain: A Look at the Life of Mildred Benson, original author of the Nancy Drew series. By Scottie Garber. Fall 2015.