Engl 3130 Advanced Composition, Spring 2017


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last update: March 22, 2017

 

Class meets on Mondays and Wednesdays, 3:10-4:30pm, in Burleson 201.

BAM = Best American Magazine Writing 2016 

SS = The Sense of Style: The Thinking Person's Guide to Writing in the 21st Century, by Steven Pinker 

 

Week 1

Wednesday, Jan 18:

Introductions. Writing tools and processes. What makes good writing?

 

Week 2

Monday, Jan 23:

1500 word rough draft of essay 1, narrative, due. As always, on draft days, bring two extra copies (a total of 3 copies) for a writing workshop.

 

Browse the UNC-Chapel Hill Writing Center Handouts on Writing Groups: writingcenter.unc.edu/handouts/writing-groups/. Read "Responding to Other People's Writing"--writingcenter.unc.edu/handouts/writing-groups/responding-to-other-peoples-writing/-- and read "Reacting to Other People's Responses to Your Writing"-- writingcenter.unc.edu/handouts/writing-groups/reacting-to-other-peoples-responses-to-your-writing/--at the UNC Writing Center website.

 

Click here for an ms word version of a writing response sheet: faculty.etsu.edu/odonnell/readings/WritingResponseWorksheet.docx. Print two copies of the sheet and bring those to class.

 

Browse the narrative student essays on the "Model Student Essays" page.

 

Wednesday, Jan 25: 

In SS, read "Prologue" p1-9, and "Chapter 1: Good Writing" p11-26. 

 

In BAM, read "The Friend," by Matthew Teague, p 277-295.

 

Read "What do students think about the five-paragraph essay?" By Jennifer Gray. Teachers, Profs, Parents: Writers Who Care -- A blog advocating for authentic writing instruction. May 26, 2015. writerswhocare.wordpress.com/2015/05/26/what-do-students-think-about-the-five-paragraph-essay/ 

 

Week 3

Monday, January 30:

Essay 1, revised, due for a grade. Also bring to class the rough draft, to submit along with the revised essay. 

 

Bring your grammar handbook to class today. 

 

Browse the tech writing student essays on the "Model Student Essays" page. Read the following:

Bare to Brilliant in Thirty Minutes: a Makeup Tutorial for the Cosmetically Challenged. By Kylie Hensley. 3130 F15

Shaken, Not Stirred: Recipes for the Creation of 4 Classic Cocktails. By C. Lynn Blados. 3130 F12

 

At the following Amazon.com website, browse the table of contents and read the introduction for Word 2013 for Dummieswww.amazon.com/Word-2013-Dummies-Dan-Gookin/dp/1118491238/ 

 

Wednesday, February 1:

Read the following professional examples of tech writing, online:

- "36 Hours in Asheville, N. C." By Shaila Dewan. New York Times, Oct 13, 2016.  www.nytimes.com/interactive/2016/10/10/travel/what-to-do-36-hours-in-asheville-north-carolina.html
- "The Bacon Explosion: Take Bacon. Add Sausage. Blog." Food article and recipe, New York Times online, January 27, 2009. www.nytimes.com/2009/01/28/dining/28bacon.html 

In BAM, read the first 4 sections of "What Is Code?" by Paul Ford, p9-36.

 

Week 4

Monday, February 6:

1500 word rough draft of essay 2, tech writing, due. As always, on draft days, bring two extra copies (a total of 3 copies) for a writing workshop.

 

Wednesday, February 8:

On Youtube, view "Great Pacific Garbage Patch." By Hank Green and the youtube channel SciShow. Published on August 7, 2012. Running time: 3:22. www.youtube.com/watch?v=Nh6lkv1udb0 

 

In BAM, read sections 5 through 7 of "What is Code?" by Paul Ford, p36-60.

 

In SS, read "Chapter 2: A Window onto the World--classic style as an antidote for academese, bureaucratese, corporatese, legalese, officialese, and other kinds of stuffy prose," p27-56.

 

Week 5

Monday, February 13:

Essay 2, revised, due for a grade. Also bring to class the rough draft, to submit along with the revised essay. 

 

Bring your grammar handbook to class today. 

 

Browse the review/ criticism student essays on the "Model Student Essays" page.

 

Read, here online, "Steven Pinker’s ‘The Sense of Style’" [book review]. By Charles McGrath. The New York Times Sunday Book Review, October 17, 2014. www.nytimes.com/2014/10/19/books/review/steven-pinker-the-sense-of-style-review.html

 

Wednesday, February 15: 

In SS, read "Chapter 3: The Curse of Knowledge--the main cause of incomprehensible prose is the difficulty of imagining what it's like for someone else not to know something that you know," p57-76.

 

In BAM, read "Down for the Count," by Howard Bryant, p269-271; and read "Stop Sending Me Jonathan Franzen Novels" by Barrett Brown, p258-266.

 

Read the following professional examples of review/ criticism, online:

- "Lead Us Not Into Debt: Finance guru Dave Ramsey wins followers with a simple message: find God and lose your credit cards." By Megan Mcardle. Atlantic Magazine, December 2009. www.theatlantic.com/magazine/archive/2009/12/lead-us-not-into-debt/7751/

- "One Stop: A 'Super' Chicken Choice," by Fred Sauceman. Kingsport Times-News, January 29, 2004. Cached at faculty.etsu.edu/odonnell/readings/one_stop_chicken.htm

 

Week 6

Monday, February 20: 

1500 word rough draft of essay 3, review/ criticism, due. As always, on draft days, bring two extra copies (a total of 3 copies) for a writing workshop.

 

Wednesday, February 22: 

Read the following, online: "Steven Pinker’s Bad Grammar." By Nathan Heller. The New Yorker, November 3, 2014. www.newyorker.com/culture/cultural-comment/steven-pinkers-bad-grammar 

Read Dawes’ Most Dawes Record Yet: A Review of All Your Favorite Bands, by Kayla Hensley, English 3130 ETSU Spring 2016.

 

Week 7

Monday February 27: 

Essay 3, revised, due for a grade. Also bring to class the rough draft, to submit along with the revised essay. 

 

Bring your grammar handbook to class today. 

 

Browse the academic student essays on the "Model Student Essays" page. Read the following: 

Attention Deficit and Hyperactivity Disorder: One Parent’s Battle to Understanding the Disorder. By Kim Rigsby. 3130 F15

The Woman Behind the Curtain: A Look at the Life of Mildred Benson, original author of the Nancy Drew series. By Scottie Garber. 3130 F15

 

Online, read "The Answer Man: An ancient poem was rediscovered—and the world swerved." By Stephen Greenblatt. The New Yorker, August 8, 2011. www.newyorker.com/reporting/2011/08/08/110808fa_fact_greenblatt 

 

Wednesday, March 1:

Read, here online, "MLA Eight Edition: What's New and Different," at the Purdue University Online Writing Lab website, last updated August, 2016: owl.english.purdue.edu/owl/resource/747/22/

In BAM, read "The Really Big One," by Kathryn Schulz, p183-200.

 

Due: Topic proposal for essay 4, academic writing. Write a memo to me and your classmates, proposing a topic. (For the purposes of this assignment, academic writing is writing that draws from, and otherwise meaningfully engages with, two or more substantial written sources.) Consider the following guidelines: 

1. Include a generous working title (including a subtitle after the colon). 

2. Describe why you are interested in the topic, and why you are qualified to write about it. 

3. If you are choosing, for this essay, to revisit a topic about which you've already written: describe the previous writing you've done on this same topic. 

4. Also, include at least one complete, formal citation for one good written source that you plan to use for your essay. Write an annotation for that source -- that is, a short paragraph describing the source and how you think it will be useful for your essay. 

 

SPRING BREAK: MARCH 6 - 10

 

Reading assignments for weeks 8 to 14 will be announced before spring break.

 

Week 8

Monday, March 13:

Draft of essay 4, academic writing, due. As always, on draft days, bring two extra copies (a total of 3 copies) for a writing workshop.

 

Wednesday, March 15: 

 

Week 9

Monday, March 20: 

Revision of essay 4 due

 

Wednesday, March 22: 

 

Week 10

Monday, March 27:

Draft of essay 5, nonfiction in the genre of your choice, due. As always, on draft days, bring two extra copies (a total of 3 copies) for a writing workshop.

 

Wednesday, March 29: 

Read, in BAM: "The New American Slavery," p63-88.

 

Week 11

Monday, April 3: 

Revision of essay 5 due

 

Wednesday, April 5: 

Revision plan due: Write a memo to me and your classmates, in which you discuss your plans for revising your best essay. Which essay do you plan to revise? What is its title? Describe the piece. Why are you choosing to revise it? What qualities does this essay have, which will lead it to find a genuine audience on the internet? What specific revisions do you plan to make, so that the essay will be ready to send out into the world? 

 

Also, bring to class a copy of the essay (or essays--plural) that you are considering revising. 

 

Also read, in BAM: "Purgatory," p154-180. 

 

Week 12

Monday, April 10: 

Bring to class a copy of the essay (or essays--plural) that you are considering revising. 

Click here for a revision checklist

At 3:45, we'll walk over to the Reece Museum on campus, for this event:

4-5pm: "Ginsberg in Johnson City: A Talk and Reading by Scott Honeycutt, on the Fiftieth Anniversary to the Day of Alan Ginsberg's Visit to Johnson City."  PARENTAL ADVISORY: EXPLICIT CONTENT

 

Wednesday, April 12:

Read, in BAM: "How It Feels," p297-310. 

 

Week 13

Monday, April 17: 

Bring to class a copy of the essay (or essays--plural) that you are considering revising. 

 

Wednesday, April 19: 

Read, in BAM: "Pregnant? Scared? Need Options? Too Bad," p111-126. 

 

Week 14

Monday, April 24: 

Revised best essay due. Email me an MS word file by 12 noon today, so that I can post your revision on the internet by class time: odonnell@etsu.edu. Also bring a printed version ("hard copy") to class. I will read and grade the printed version, but I must first receive your electronic version, as a condition for grading the printed essay. 

 

Wednesday, April 26: 

In class writing, based on your notebook entries regarding your essay grades and comments. 

Be sure to review and bring to class your notebook with the following entries, regarding the grades and comments you received on each of your 5 essays:

- Monday, Feb 6, essay 1 (narrative)

- Monday, Feb 20, essay 2 (tech writing)

- Monday, March 20 (??), essay 3 (review essay)

- Monday, April 3, essay 4 (academic essay)

- Monday, April 10, essay 5 (genre and topic of your choice)

 

Final exam period: Wednesday, May 3, 2017: 10:30 a.m -12:30 p.m.